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Post by embercoral on Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:06 am

HI. I'm looking for Tyranidking because Mudo told me that he might be able to help me. I made a post on the GAC forum yesterday about a game project I'm working on -->Grand Kirby Project

I was told that he was really into Zero.

If you find this and you're not Tyranidking, could you please tell him that I need to talk to him? It would be most appreciated. Thanks. Smile
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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by Tyranidking on Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:08 am

Zero, the white eyeball of doom?

I'm your Tyranid ^^

How can I assist you?

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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by embercoral on Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:17 am

Well, I need to know if I'm going in the right direction with this. I've made several "cutscenes" and a couple real adventures for this, and I just hope I'm not accidently ruining Zero. I'd tell you the entire intended plot, but that would take a while...my sporecast is titled "Kirby: Zero Empathy". Do you think you could play what I and my small team have made so far and give me an opinion? It's best to start in the order that they appear(bottom to top) so that you don't miss anything important.
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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by Tyranidking on Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:19 am

Certainly, you'll have to give me a link and I'll have a look at them.

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Post by embercoral on Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:25 am

Okay. link to sporecast My username is the same here as it is on Spore.
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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by Tyranidking on Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:30 am

I'll subscribe to it for any updates you make.

I'll view the storyline and give my opinion, but be a little patient as I have half a dozen other projects going on right now ^^'

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Post by embercoral on Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:41 am

Sure. Take your time. I know how you feel. Trust me! Hard Work
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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by Tyranidking on Wed Aug 25, 2010 8:44 am

Right, I've seen it all so far, and I will now give my opinion on your rendition of Zero.

As far as character goes, you've done really, really well. You've managed to portray the new Zero in a more affectionate light while keeping the sad and lonely side of his lifestyle. Particularly brilliant is how you have managed to show how literally everyone hates him, to the point you made kirby, the most innocent character in the series, react by immediately trying to kill 03 the moment he appears. You have actually succeded in making Zero the most sympathetic villain imaginable, in that you have pulled off showing he has no friends, and no allies, just people who fear and revile him. Zero's character is brilliant, and that's the best way to go.

As far as design is concerned, I'm not that happy in the aspect of Zero-Three having arms. It just doesn't look right, but the wing design and the new halo look good, and the idea of him wearing golden chains is fantastic. Maybe line his body with golden chains to resemble imprisonment, despair and loneliness? Regardless, how Zero-Three is portrayed is not my business- it's your series and you must do what you feel is right- but in offering fair critique I just felt like mentioning the arms just do not look good.

Alignment to finish. I love how you have tried integrating him as at least a neutral party, if not good. It gives a feeling that at last he's trying to fit in with the world, and not trying to get revenge on people for singling him out and bullying him. He's trying to be a better person, while the others still seem to see no difference. That makes for great character development. I also like how- staying true to all of Zero's appearances- you have Zero-Three appear out of nowhere, a completely unexpected view. It also started of with him seeming evil. These are both great ways of keeping his mysterious feel, and it is brilliant.

Overall, good luck with this project, and if you want my services in SPORE, please drop by and say hi.

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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by Mudo on Wed Aug 25, 2010 9:25 am

I had a feeling that the two of you would hit it off pretty well. Wink Glad to help the two of you get to working together on this. I dunno if you are having trouble with anything so far, but alow me to say now, my specialty is in adventure effects. In other words, I'm pretty good with cutscenes. (Want proof? Check my Brundis teaser) If you ever have any trouble making something work in an adventure, I'm your man. Smile
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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by Tyranidking on Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:18 am

......Aaaanyway, I look forward to updates on this.


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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by embercoral on Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:44 am

Great! Actually, I myself am starting to hate the whole arm deal. I can't change him now because then it would upset the series. I'm going to do the next cutscene soon. Right now, most will be aboard the Halberd unless something new comes up.

I really need help with making the remaining galaxies and with making enemies to go with them. If you look at the enemies made so far, you can sorta get a feel for what I'm looking for. If this were to be a real game, I would want to reintroduce mixed abilities because those looked really cool in 64(I never actually played the game myself) and it sucks that they were mostly taken out(except for in Squeak Squad, which wasn't the best game in the world). Since this is Spore, I can't do that right now, so I'm focusing on the regular abilities.

The remaining galaxies are as follows: 2(cave), 6(lava), 8(water), 9(robotic), and 10(cosmic). The ones that aren't on this list are either already done or taken by me or a member of my team. I made a template for anyone interested to follow. You don't have to if you don't want to, but I would really appreciate any help in making this real.

If you liked the beginning, then you'll really like what's to come, but I won't tell you everything...unless you enjoy spoilers! Very Happy
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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by Tyranidking on Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:47 am

Well, only tell me what I need to know in order to help you. In the meantime, I look forward to helping you and have registered on GAC solely for that task.

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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by embercoral on Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:43 am

Okay, so I finally posted the newest cutscene, I made a creation as sort of a conference room(since the rest of my team doesn't use forums), and I made a music sample for all major events I have planned for the story. If you've looked through the enemies and other creatures in the sc, then you might know what will happen later on already.

Some of the music themes won't make much sense unless you know the entire plot...I'm willing to tell the plot to anyone who is impatient, but only in a PM.
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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by Tyranidking on Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:44 am

The only info I need is what you want me to do in your project- things you need me to make, ect. ect.

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Post by embercoral on Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:55 am

Well...I already mentioned the galaxies that need to be made...and Stchurdak gave up on Galaxy 7 for some odd reason, so that's available now. I'm thinking of an ally system right now. For each galaxy, a new ally will become available after defeating the Dark Matter Boss. You can then choose up to three allies in the beginning of the adventure by befriending them. I can't think of what kind of allies to add. We already have Mylo the Magician and Gooey(maybe). Can you think of anything?
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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by Tyranidking on Wed Sep 01, 2010 2:05 am

I can think of something, but I will require a short amount of time to properly address it.

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Re: I need to talk to Tyranidking

Post by embercoral on Wed Sep 01, 2010 2:13 am

Okay. Take your time. I'm not rushing anyone here. Smile
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